This Round's Inspiration 10/14/09

Welcome back FANS. This re-inaugural round of AVW's inspiration is...

"Prediction"

Give us what you got whenevs. We're going to change it around a bit so that there's no real deadline. Instead we'll just accept what you got, when you got it...even if we've moved on to a new inspiration. There will be a running log of all the inspirations on the right hand side of the page so you can pick and choose which you'd prefer to write on. So, ya know, hop to it.


Sunday, June 1, 2008

Where Will You Go?, Submission 5 by Lee Martin

“Where will you go?” asked Sara, her feet swishing back in forth in the water as she dangled them off the dock. Her pink shoes lay forgotten in the grass behind her. The muted orange sky turned all the shadows to dark green.

“I don’t know. Do you think I will be able to go places?” said Tim.

“I dunno. Maybe. I heard that you can.”

“Then I will come here!” said Tim.

“Come on! You have to pick someplace exotic! Remote! Like California…”

“Is that where you’d go?”

Sara paused. “I haven’t thought about it,” she said, thinking she probably wouldn’t have to for quite a while. “When did you find out you’re leaving?”

“A few months ago,” said Tim casually as he swam back and forth in the warm water to the beat of crickets singing.

“Does it hurt?” asked Sara, pulling her black hair back behind her ear.

“A little. Sometimes.” said Tim. “I will spy on you.”

“You better not!” said Sara.

In the shower...,” said Tim slyly.

“Don’t!” said Sara, reaching down off the dock and splashing Tim in the face.

“You won’t even know! Sometimes I will be there, sometimes not. But for all you know I’ll live in your shower!”

“Oh no you won’t!” said Sara as she jumped off the dock and crashed into the lake next to Tim. She put her hand on his head and pushed him down. Tim grabbed her leg and pulled her under. They shoved and splashed for a few minutes before Tim’s mother called down to the dock.

“Tim! It’s time for your medicine!”

“Ugh! That’s one thing I won’t miss,” said Tim.


Sara skipped the funeral the next week and threw small sticks into the moving water and watched them glide away.

“Ok, that should be enough time,” she said as she stood up. It was nearly sunset again as she ran back to the house. She closed the bathroom door behind her, locked it, and smiled as she took off her clothes and started the shower.

Breaking the Water, Submission 5 by Charlie Arnold

Running through the woods it was easy to see how important this message was to Headquarters. There were only days left before it would end. At this point there’s no telling which side was going to win.

They weren’t the only ones who considered recon. The enemy must have performed their own, cutting off the lines of communication. Now the equipment was as useless as a string with a single tin can.

They knew the other side was more familiar with war. There were jokes that they were made for battle. We’ve spied some of their conversations where they said we were better at intelligence. Well I guess we didn’t learn anything from that one. But something on this scale was never expected. The introduction of navel warfare.

“Martin, I should have known. Who else knew this land better than you?” He was infamous because of the familiarity he had and the threat he presented.

“C’mon Taylor, you always use your best pieces for the final moves. And I was the one who severed your line.”

“I figured that much.”

They both looked out on the lake.

“Beautiful isn’t she?”

A smile grew on Martin’s face as Taylor looked down in defeat.

“False information,” muttered Taylor.

“That’s right. This was first thrown on the table as a joke. But when people get behind something and give it an awesome name like ‘Operation Breaking Water’ code named ‘DamnAmn’ it can’t be stopped. All we had to do was make you think we were behind schedule until it was too late. Now that my job’s done I’m going for a swim, you in?”

Martin was in the process of taking off his shirt and shoes.

“After all that running I went through for no reason, no! But I think I’ll sit here for a while.”

With a running start Martin yells out, “And the boys win!”

“Do you think we’ll have any classes together this year?” asks Taylor.

Monday, May 19, 2008

IM Pranx feat. GOD, Submission 4 by Ryan Wrenn

Submission 4 inspiration: create a narrative that gives a different perspective of a well known historical event.

~33 A.D.

GOD: sup

JesusChrist0: nm, goin 2 jerusalem 2morrow

GOD: o sweet

JesusChrist0: ? i hurd jerusalem sux

GOD: no its so awesome

JesusChrist0: ppl r sayin i shouldnt go.

GOD: y

JesusChrist0: romans h8 on me

GOD: no they think ur sweet

JesusChrist0: o rly?

GOD: ya rly

JesusChrist0: judas is here

JesusChrist0: brb

GOD: lol ok

JesusChrist0 signed off at 1:22 a.m.